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Jerry commented on the post, The fish in the sea 9 years, 7 months ago
In reply to: Jerry wrote a new post, The fish in the sea Others look in on my feelings Like gold fish in their glass bowl Only if I remembered this feeling for 3 seconds Life would not sting as much Although this […] ViewIn the poem the speaker is some one fishing, at the start it is a comparison it is not saying he is a fish.
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Jerry wrote a new post, My heart is a homeless man. 9 years, 7 months ago
My heart knows what it wants
Yet it knows it cant have
It is like a homeless man who knows what he wants to eat
But cant afford to eat it
My mind knows what is right
Yet my heart is the stronger of […]
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Jerry wrote a new post, The fish in the sea 9 years, 7 months ago
Others look in on my feelings
Like gold fish in their glass bowl
Only if I remembered this feeling for 3 seconds
Life would not sting as much
Although this sting keeps me swimming.
I am the […]
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Jerry became a registered member 9 years, 7 months ago
The speaker in the poem, is it a fish or someone fishing? I only ask because the poem starts with the speaker as a fish but at the end you say “I catch nothing”.
In the poem the speaker is some one fishing, at the start it is a comparison it is not saying he is a fish.